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   Michael on July 4, 2014 at 6:52 pm

   Love it! The foreshadowing of the ‘prison stripes’ in his sweater is an iconic touch, revealed later that he lives as a self-imposed captive to his tragic past.

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     JATMAN on July 5, 2014 at 8:14 am

     That’s deep, Michael, so deep. I based it in a snow winter because it makes a person want to hibernate and shut themselves in. I also dressed him trying to make him look uptight and hermit-like, but I like your ‘prison stripes’ analogy. It does fit for this story. Thanks so very much for reading and commenting. JATMAN

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   Lucinda on July 5, 2014 at 5:38 am

   Wow, that is so fun, fabulous! Your imagination knows no bounds!

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     JATMAN on July 5, 2014 at 8:06 am

     Thanks so much Lucinda. So sweet. Have a fabulous weekend. JATMAN

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   Phyllis on November 14, 2014 at 2:03 pm

   Really cute story. I loved how he only wanted what he couldn’t have, but ended up getting that in the end!

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     JATMAN on November 14, 2014 at 7:05 pm

     Thanks so much Phyllis!

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